It's nice

Totally different from what I'm use to, but Wonderfully writen. 5/5

Loving the flow of the poem 5/5

Really likes how you did two different point of views!
Nice poem :]

Interesting style u created here...i got tot of doin something like this too but alwayz lost for words...maybe this poems will be my inspiration for my next poem

A very clever poem i must say, unique in that you show two perspectives , nice.
Well written I like the contasting yet similar meanings of the two stanzas , very interesting

Grant