by Finalgravedigger Feb 21, 2008
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Words and inner devils |
by Nebula
I love it. Definilty evokes feelings of moments everyone has experience like this. Very well done! |
by Krissymkitty
I really liked it! it was short but very descriptive and easy to follow (i thought) 5/5...oh and thanks for ur comment! |
by rpmnark7
I love the way you word things. |
by Jason Meres
Speaks to the sinking idea in the back of every mind that each daily game of life is unfalteringly rigged to stay just out of reach. Perfectly described and executed. |
by Blissful
The imagery here was just amazing and made the poem complete for me. Each line was powerful and filled with meaning which was effective in getting your message across. Well done *5/5* |