by Sarah Feb 21, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I gave you my heart unconditionally |
Wow, excellent write with so much emotion within. The flow was flawless, and your choice of words was so simple yet got the point across very well. The structure was alright, I think it may have been better if it was broken into stanzas, but that is just my opinion. Overall a fantastic write. Keep up the great work. |