I love the way you rhyme things. You do a good job. This poem was really sad, kind of made me think about a movie i watched, I can't think of the title at the moment haha, but it had Reece Witherspoon in it. OH YEAH, It was called "Just like Heaven" Haha. If you haven't seen it, it was a about a women that got into a comma, and her soul was still walking around, and only one guy could see her. & He fell in love with her. It was about him trying to bring her back. & He eventually does. Good ending haha. But once again, lovely poem. 5/5!

This poem is very inspirational--wow was this something you really had to deal with? yeah that movie is great it shows anything is possible. Again a great write--talent is seeping through!

It is like the movie but ur poem was very cute i loved how u made it remind all of us of that movie, u did a GREAT job on it keep it up! 5/5 always
Kate~

Close to tears reading that. one of the best poems I have read on this website 5/5 and is going into my favourites