I want to be that Girl!!

by Unamed   Feb 21, 2008


I want to be that girl
the girl he can't live without.
I want to be that girl
the girl he wakes up thinking about.
I want to be that girl
the last thing he thinks about at night.
I want to be that girl
the girl who'll blush at his every smile.
I want to be that girl
the girl who he'll ditch his buddies just for her.
I want to be that gir
the girl he'll call in the middle of the night because he can't stop thinking about her.
I want to be that girl
the girl he can't sleep without hearing her voice.
I want to be that girl
the girl he'll call right after they fight.
I want to be that girl
the girl he'll give flowers to out of her own yard because she's pretty, or just because it's wednsday.
I want to be that girl
the girl he's thinking about 24/7.

Don't u get it?
I want to be that girl!!!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Justin

    Heh, i like this! Ur right our poems are alike.. Its like we wrote them to each other hah =D 5/5 great poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    Its a really nice poem. The concept is good. But the repetition of "I want to be that girl" kinda hurt the poem a little. It would've been better if you had made less stanza's and combined a few. Still a beautiful poem :)

  • 16 years ago

    by DaydreamerSki

    This was so cute. I want to be that girl to. lol =P No but I think that the only thing that u should work on is ur flow but other than that it was really good. 4/5

    ->Juliea<-

  • 16 years ago

    by Annette

    This is deffinetly a good poem 5\5

  • 16 years ago

    by Laurenf7

    Another great poem 5/5

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