Another great poem 5/5

This is deffinetly a good poem 5\5

This was so cute. I want to be that girl to. lol =P No but I think that the only thing that u should work on is ur flow but other than that it was really good. 4/5

->Juliea<-

Its a really nice poem. The concept is good. But the repetition of "I want to be that girl" kinda hurt the poem a little. It would've been better if you had made less stanza's and combined a few. Still a beautiful poem :)

Heh, i like this! Ur right our poems are alike.. Its like we wrote them to each other hah =D 5/5 great poem