Drop Dead Gorgeous

by Melly   Feb 22, 2008


Originally a quote..but didn't fit in the quotes section.

so you walk around with half a heart. & the only
thing you ever feel is torn apart. you have gotten
blood shot eyes, & the only view you see are the
tears that you cry. You deal with the same people
again and gain, & the only people you really know
are the ones who leave you in the end. So you don't
want to live this life, but you're not sure if you
really want to die, make up your mind, & drop
dead gorgeous, dieing it chance of a life time.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I really liked this. Two things that bothered me were when you used the & sign. I would just say "and". Aslo when you spelled dying wrong. You said dieing. Other than that, I thought you did a wonderful job. I love the imagery and the use of short sentences. Very nice work. Nik

  • 16 years ago

    by monica

    I like the flow. tis good. (added to my faves)

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