by Ahmed Ismail Feb 22, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Shedding tears on the old school yard |
Good job ahmed..I liked the poem but I think it would b much better if it were a lil bit longer.. |
Well all ov ur poEmz r related to a girl2whom u luv(perhaps'?)...ne'vy keep tryn'ur best..u'll get her..anyway rate my poEmz.. |