That was very cute! but remember part of loveing some1 even if u cant help it, is knowing, and realizing ur giving some1 the chance to brake ur heart. keep in mind true love is patceint and if u really love him ull wait for him, dont b scared! nice write, u expressed ur feeling very well 5/5 always
Kate~

Aww adorable poem girly!!! really good job of expressing your feelings sometimes you cant help falling in love with someone so enjoy it sweetie! you have to take chances in life you only have so much time here...make it worth your while! anyway 5/5 <33

This is really great...you have a really nice talent

Lovely poem, first love or crush is kind of confusing. I hope everything is good with you and you will find your true love insh'Allah.

I really like this peom. i know what you mean

Awh that's so cute.

Nice poem, i can relate..

I like this poem because I know how it is to not have someone like you back when they want someone else. And I understand this poem well. :) I like this poem the most out of them all and thanks for commenting on my poem. Just returnin' the favor. :)