The Shattered Remains of Ignorance

by Poetic Ninja aka Papachopchop   Feb 22, 2008


You sit there in your heartache
Waiting on some beautiful boy to
Save you from your old ways
You sit and wait day after day,

You never think to ever look back,
Or even to try to keep track,
Why would someone want you,
With an inner heart so full of black,

You sit and wonder whens your day,
When you'll find someone to take you away,
But if anyone were to save you from your dismay,
It would ultimately be them that would end up paying,

Your such a kid, immature at best,
You'll end up creating such a mess,
You don't even know what you want,
I'm sorry to say this but I have to be blunt,

You need to sit and self reflect,
So you can give us guys our needed respect,
It will take some time, but once you do,
You may end up finding that person for you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    Well, it's not my favorite but only beause it's not so much Danielish. I mean, yeah it's what you feel. But, the kinda 'hate' feelings in it isn't you. If that makes sense.

    Amazing job. x]
    It's amazingly flawless,
    just not my favorite.
    Lol.