WOW. Very good write. The flow was unbelievable and your choice of vocabulary was wonderful. Very good job on the voice also. Perfectly written.
5/5

This was a really good poem. There was a few flow problems, but other than that I really enjoyed it. Your rhymes were not cliched which I really liked. 5/5

Wow great poem really sad I can relate

Oh my goodness this is amazing, the form is simply wonderful, great job, i love the endeng its so sad, but i can really relate to this piece great job... 5/5

Great flow...beautiful write 5/5