Excellent. i dont necissarily agree with the ending, but yeah, thats just me. this is freaking awesome. i love the part where you smile and count to one. thats perfect.

--TheGothicAlbino

Wow....great poem...it gave great visuals, almost as if i was there watching everything happen. great job

I loved it the love for the demone on you're shoulder was so great you would do anthing to see the happyness apon his face and yet with no remorise he asked you to give him every little thing to leave you alone and dead in the end it a lovely poem you have to keep writing poems ^^ I would love to read more well I'll rate 5/5 ^^

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Sami

This was so full of conflicting emotions. It was like "BANG!" The end and I'm Just awe'd by this poem. Greatly Awed. It is Truly Excellent. I Must say. I find it very True in a sense. I Loved it though. Complete Five Out of Five.

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-ally