Cheater

by Beautiful Forever   Feb 22, 2008


"I love you", with a smile,
You know this isn't right,
He'll come over for awhile,
And be inside you all night,

Hes gone at the sign of light,
And you're left all alone,
Giving you a half-loved night,
You didn't even moan,

Two nights later hes here,
Coming into your home,
Whispering sweet nothings in your ear,
Making your sexual thoughts roam,

The cycle continues to repeat,
And you're lost inside a lie,
He's only there when you're in heat,
Any other time it's "Goodbye",

So before he comes back one more time,
Think of what he's doing to you,
Read this poetic rhyme,
And tell him that you're through.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lemma

    Love the moral behind this one, the flow was sometimes a little off but otherwise it was great. The rhyme was awesome and I loved the sense of frustration that I got from it. My favourite line was:

    "And you're lost inside a lie,"

    Fabby =)

    5/5

    Em xXx

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Amazing poem... i loved it... the flow was perfect and not forced..and the rhyming was really good... i zipped right through it and didnt have to pause once... which is really good...

    and your ending was a "BAM" kinda ending you know? lol

    loved it. definately deserves a 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    This is greatt!

    The cycle continues to repeat,
    And you're lost inside a lie,
    He's only there when you're in heat,
    Any other time it's "Goodbye",

    i love that stanza.. the flow.. the rhyme and just the whole poem in general.. excellent job!... it really grabbed my attention from the first line and kept me wanting to read more. Great job! =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Krayz Lyfe

    Nice flow and ur poem reminds me of a book i read once too and i liked the book so kudos

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