Are you the one?

by Sammerz   Feb 22, 2008


Could you be the
one i've been looking for?
this feeling you give
me makes me want you.
Makes me want you
like i need you.
I cant be without you.
Every time we talk
i jus want to
hold you, cuddle with you.
Your like a dream
come true but
i feel like its
jus all a lie
or a fantasy.
could this really be?

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  • 16 years ago

    by your love is mine

    Love is no joke if someone says she loves you with real feeling you know that they love you.

  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen

    Ill tell you wut..jus go straight up to that freako and ask him like ...do u like me or do u like me???hahaha..jk..

    nice poem babe...xx

  • 16 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    Damn, I am feeling this and it just went too much of ahead but u did perfect on this.

  • 16 years ago

    by Mello193

    Woah, I REALLY liked this one. It was so romantic but very sad at the same time. Again I think you could have written more and tweaked the form but overall good job

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