Woah, I REALLY liked this one. It was so romantic but very sad at the same time. Again I think you could have written more and tweaked the form but overall good job

Damn, I am feeling this and it just went too much of ahead but u did perfect on this.

Ill tell you wut..jus go straight up to that freako and ask him like ...do u like me or do u like me???hahaha..jk..

nice poem babe...xx

Love is no joke if someone says she loves you with real feeling you know that they love you.