Comments : Lately You've Been On My Mind

  • 16 years ago

    by SCARECROW

    One small thing: in stanza 2, perhaps you means "vice-versa"? I'm sorry if I'm being anal retentive over a trivial issue (which I am, but I really can't help my nature)~
    But really, it's a great poem! Short and well-woven with emotion, 5/5 from me.

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Lovely poem i can really relate to this one =)
    once again great flow and i loved the word you used.

  • 16 years ago

    by Juls

    Love this poem. always a fan of your poems Joe..always always always =]
    I can relate so well to this poem.
    keep writing, keep posting!