by Beautiful Forever Feb 22, 2008
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
You whisper softly in my ear, |
Powerful words in this poem. i like the way you rhyme 2 stanza's and then the next 2. its brilliant. definatly unique. the structure was great too. 5/5 !props! |
by Michelle18
Woooo..u kicked a** with this one lol... |