Woooo..u kicked a** with this one lol...

its strong and powerful and i could feel the emotions and anger jump out of the page...

the flow was flawless and the rhyming was on point the entire time...

loved it. this is one of my favorites from you.

definately 5/5 ..its well deserved.

Powerful words in this poem. i like the way you rhyme 2 stanza's and then the next 2. its brilliant. definatly unique. the structure was great too. 5/5 !props!