Hiya, I like your poem. It reminds me of my nan. I too lost her about 7 years ago. The morning I found out I jumped on the first train from London to my mum's home. On the train I wrote a poem for my Gran. I read the poem at her funeral and hope she heard every word.
I haven't actually entered it on here, but now after reading your quality piece I will!

Good work
Michael 5/5