This poem was very deep, and I felt it! The flow was a little shaky though... The word choice was great, and the concept was brilliant. I think this could've been written a little differently to make it more effective... *just my opinion don't take offense* Overall, great write 5/5! Keep it up :P

I love your idea about the calm before the storm, it expresses the atmosphere of the poem so well
and the last 2 stanzas are amazing
very emotional and beautiful
5\5