The Last

by Donovan   Feb 23, 2008


As he falls bleeding to the ground
Nothing escapes him, not even a sound
The gun falls with a thud to the floor
It's played it's part, silent once more
No one around to hear the blast
The boy was alone to the very last

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Short, and to the point.

    Great write

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by deaddarkwolf

    Ok short but omfg god i love the two last lines
    "No one around to hear the blast
    The boy was alone to the very last"
    I love those lines sorry ^^# I'm strang but really I guess it's because thats what i think my ends like not the succide put but I think I'm going to be alone in the silentce to the end he sorry well anyway I loved it and plz keep writing ^^ I hope to read more

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    Sami,

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