Ok short but omfg god i love the two last lines
"No one around to hear the blast
The boy was alone to the very last"
I love those lines sorry ^^# I'm strang but really I guess it's because thats what i think my ends like not the succide put but I think I'm going to be alone in the silentce to the end he sorry well anyway I loved it and plz keep writing ^^ I hope to read more

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Sami,

Short, and to the point.

Great write

5/5