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by StandStill   Feb 23, 2008


I'll love you in silence
and in the middle of the night
you will be my sunrise
and you will make everything right
in the depths of my heart
I know it is true
I try to deny it
but I love you
i don't think i need
and I don't think I want
and this horrible truth
it does taunt
and you say to me
that you'll wisk me away
into a beautiful land
tantalizingly close at bay
and I think I agree
if only
it could be
but I don't really want to go
I have nowhere to leave
so for now
my heart will just grieve
but when I grow old
my shoulder won't be so cold
and I'll be yours
to have and to hold
but when I wake up from this dream
I'll still be here
and maybe you'll be here with me...

sunrise, my dear, you just have to be patient. no kidnapping......

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  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Well it was a good poem, I have some suggestions though.

    I think to improve this you should organize the structure, capitalize the I's. :)

    And if you want someone to suggest you a title well.. here's my suggestion xD
    "You'll Still Be Far Away From me"
    ^^ using the last line as the title is effective - in my opinion.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nikkicola

    Hey I really like this...Can I just say...I feel this way...You write such good poems. :-) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by devils angel sunrise

    My angel that melts my heart and makes it hard not to come to you i miss you greatly but we both have school to finish

  • 16 years ago

    by TwistedAngel xx

    Love the line about growing old and being yours to hold
    nice poem
    keep it up
    xx
    has anyone written u a poem yet?

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