Won & Lost, 2 more lines

by michael   Feb 23, 2008


Crouching in the long lost leaves
thousands of warriors
died on these

Tons of blood
scattered around
metal clatters
as men fall to the ground

War is won and
War is lost
Either way men are gone

Their families morn
They hate the lost

But the government
insists its a good cost

The battle keeps raging
over again
I cant keep the noise from reaching my head

The shouting the pain the curses i hear
Burn me inside, As I shed the first tear.

PLease comment I want to know what you think.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cody Jo as you no

    Wow since i dont beleive in the war i absolutly loved it and this is so true plz pm me