Wow. Very deep. I can tell that this poem came exactly from the heart, from someones inner truth, and soul.
Made me think of someone I want to be with, how they are my everything.
I like the title of the poem. It adds to the power of that word "you" in the poem when reading it.
5/5

Nice title, it fits the poem well. Nice word choice and tone. all around 5/5. Its good to let it out sometimes, thats what poems and screaming are for ;)

Ok first of all, i got confused. im going to be honest, you should put more lines together to make it flow out of the readers mouth instead of it just plopping out. theres a lot of emotion in this poem. 4/5

Wow nice wording. very good. 5/5

Amazing,really like it!
fav. line:Chased by my fears, being confirmed by the backwards hell that is my mind

This is unique, i think i've never read a poem like this. There are so many emotions put in 2 stanzas
and such short sentences kinda intensify atmosphere of the poem
5/5

Short and sweet, Once again great job