Be With Me

by Anaisthitos   Feb 23, 2008


Mesmerized, hypnotized,
abducted by those blue eyes.
Your voice, your laugh, your smile.
The things that you say
make it so hard
to breathe.

Is my heart still beating?
Am I still alive?
With you, here.
Say my name again.
Smile one more time.
I've forgot everything.
Even the girl who I once thought would never be suspended from my mind.
All there is, is you.
The world is silent, distant, meaningless.
Your eyes are what I see.
All that I see.
They hold a person who I want to grasp.
Who I want to take over,
as you've taken over me.

Be with me.

Oh you,
so beautiful,
so far away,
take my hand.
Be with me.

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  • 16 years ago

    by desiring love

    Wow keep writing. it was 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Polaroid

    Neato, i liked it, keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    I loved how effortlessly this flowed. The meaning behind it was immensly profound and one I could relate with. Your emotions were real and spoke deeply too me. I loved how fast paced the flow was .. it was real effective in getting your message across. Well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    A beautiful piece!! I liked everything about it, the words, every sentence and I didn't mind how it flowed... it just worked with the poem! I thought you got your point across really well, and the imagery was well done as well! Keep up the amazing work!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Buetiful and sweet!sounds like u really luv this person,great poem

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