The looking glass

by meganmarie   Feb 23, 2008


She feels the blood drip from her heart
the agonizing pain stinging like shards of shattered glass
truth be told he tried his best
to fill the aching hole
she doesn't want to make her vows
she'll leave him here
to cry his heart out
he's pleading to her
don't leave me here without you
the tears are crashing into the looking glass
so take a look
it shows your fate
he's sick as he sees
the bloody end to it all
oh let's keep looking through th looking glass
maybe this will be your savior
as your falling forward, slowly slipping
the looking glass disappears
you wake up beside the hospital bed
and there she lays like stone
her eyes are closed in deathly silence
her frozen hands lifelessly hanging
you scream and shatter the accursed looking glass
the lifeless body starts to fade
as if she's not even there
he's falling into darkness
drowning, drowning...

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  • 15 years ago

    by AnCi

    OMG! I have no words for how powerful this poem is! I really love your style of writing.. How you put new emotions into every line and you make eveyrthing sound so good without rhyming... Keep on writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael Verterel

    Very deep...
    Great piece...

  • 16 years ago

    by Mike Adams

    Very very good poem....great job

  • 16 years ago

    by girly

    Damnn. nice work.

  • This was so sad and so deep. I loved it. You did a great job on this!