Baby

by she   Feb 23, 2008


U can't see your beauty beyond you're pain
U can't see the hope beyond your despair, u cant see my hand though it is there
Baby, let my love replace your pain
Baby let my love replace your blade
Baby it'll be okay
U have no future for your grip is on the past
Ur afraid of happiness, afraid it won't last
Baby, let my love replace your pain
Baby let my love replace your blade
Baby, trust me, oh trust me, it'll be okay

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  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Awww this is so sweet. well done on this its great x

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Aww that was touching hunny, well done x

  • 16 years ago

    by Forever Broken

    This poem is another keeper. It touched me deeply. I hope they realized your love for them. once again 5/5
    kat

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    I like this one.. but i have one suggestion...

    "U can't see the hope beyond your despair, u cant see my hand though it is there"

    ^^this line is kinda long..and it kinda threw the flow off... maybe you should take out this part..."you cant see the hope beyond your despair." and then leave the other part..

    other than that i thought it was great.5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by T babyluv

    This is sweet n very cache 2...deep loved it!!

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