Let me say that your poems are so powerfull and I know just what u r sayin in them for my girl that just passed last month was a cuter to when I met her so I feel ur pain coming from these poems keep up the amazing work. 5/5

Tammi,

This is sweet n very cache 2...deep loved it!!

I like this one.. but i have one suggestion...

"U can't see the hope beyond your despair, u cant see my hand though it is there"

^^this line is kinda long..and it kinda threw the flow off... maybe you should take out this part..."you cant see the hope beyond your despair." and then leave the other part..

other than that i thought it was great.5/5

This poem is another keeper. It touched me deeply. I hope they realized your love for them. once again 5/5
kat

Aww that was touching hunny, well done x

Awww this is so sweet. well done on this its great x