DADDY are you listing?

by Hollywood   Feb 23, 2008


Daddy why are you always gone?
Why is this lady here?
She is acting like my mother..
You told me my mother got shot..you told me that you and her were out getting ready to eat dinner than someone shot her...you told me that you wished it could have been you that had died..
Daddy i need you more than anything..mommy is gone and you have to except that...DADDY...DADDY ARE YOU LISTING TO ME??!!

Baby i am listing to you..i have dreams of all of us as a family..wish that i could have died cause i don't know one thing about children..all i knew at the time was we were going to do this together everything went fine until you were at your grandmas ans we went out to eat then they killed her...i..i cry every night for her..for you..that maybe you can grow up to be half the women your mother was..you remind me so much of her...your big brown eyes and your black hair..and your big smile...baby i love you and i will try to be the best father you will ever ask for..

Daddy you already are the best dad any girl could ever ask for..i just don't want that lady to take care of me i want you to take care of me.............

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  • 15 years ago

    by Rodney Kirby

    Very sweet and from the heart, i feel for you really i do,

  • 15 years ago

    by LiveLoveLearnDie

    For a start, I'm sorry that this has happened to you. I know how it feels for you to want your dad to take care of you.
    You have expressed many emotions in a beautiful way. I hope you continue to write your emotions about this as the worst thing is to keep it in, locked up.
    PM me anytime if you want to talk. I know what your going through, literally.

  • 16 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    You have a nack of making the reader feel
    your words thats talent

  • 16 years ago

    by ReinaPuente

    Im srry about your mom...
    i can kinda relate to this in away..
    my dads never here..in fact he aint here
    i havent been with my mom in over 8 years she says she loves me...i love her to i guess...i dont hardly know her...i cant love someone that didnt care..
    5/5
    love this poem

  • 16 years ago

    by SweetGrief

    I"m definitely going to cry, This is amazin...