This is very gud. You gave it a very good imagery.

The only thing in life i wasn't prepared for
Deception and deceit took me offguard
offbalance i fall, thanx to the con
I still walk alone

The fourth stanza was awesome.

Good JoB! 5/5

This one is my favorite ~Layla~

I loved your poem. You have a talent for writing

A beautiful poem

leading to depth of emotions.............

keep writting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Woah!! gr8 poem and i mean it!! its waz very inspiring and u can understand the reality of the poem!!! keep writing!!

I hope you're not feeling this bad. your words were put together nicely. it's a very sad poem, but you did a good job. good stuff.

It's a good poem. Well tried... Keep writing.

This was a lovely write. i liked the flow and the way you wrote it. very wise.

Broken by the betrayal
Lacking the necessary paraphernalia of life
Instead of a heart now beats a stone
I walk alone

that was a perfect ending. and also my favorite lines. loved it all. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.

I really liked this poem, it was so good, 5/5!