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keep up the good work on all your poems. thanks for reading my poems I appreciate it

np i dont like ppl being sad

hey nice poem.. i thought it was pretty good.. i just found it hard to read because it was just like a paragraph.. i find it hard reading them poems.. other then that is was really kewl.. i liked it heaps.. good job

Nice work. You have potential.
The words anbd theme were great.
Your style is alright, but in my opinion, it needs some spacing. Your poems has to have flow, a body. It's for the benefit of the reader.
-Peace

ok thanks for the help. i will do better next time.