Very heartfelt poem, nicely written. Just some suggestions:

"I see and know hes there I cant reach no matter what I try"
hes should be like this: he's

"I try to be strong I see life from another angle"
I think it would sound better if there was an as between strong and I.

Another thing, throughout the poem, you spelled realize wrong. It should be realize. Otherwise, I absolutely love this poem, and I can tell you worked hard on it. Take care!

Love this one:)
5/5

Thank you.