Simple, short, and magnificent. This was a very emotional poem, Good job.

You are new, you are starting off really well.

5/5.

Take care,

-Sarah A.

Short,but such strong words.

I completely understand the emotions flowing through this but don't let it control you ok? It'll eat you up from the inside out :P Fantastic job on writing this and you really have the startings of great talent, keep it up :) 5/5
~*Rhea*~

Hey!!!! i loved both your poems!!!!!! i would comment the other one also but i dont have much time!!! i give YOU 5/5