Notice Me

by Miranda   Feb 23, 2008


I'm here,broken
You left me here
You left me in my hour of need
You used to understand
You don't understand now
why can't you try?
Just try to notice
you don't want to see
don't want to see me
with slits up my wrist
and bones sticking out
Don't want to admit
how little you know me
Your own daughter
Your little angel
isn't little anymore
and definitely isn't an angel
If you would look at me
I mean really look
you would realize I'm fake
my fake little speech
my fake little laugh
my fake little smile
and my fake personality
you haven't noticed
I thought you would
I was so obvious
at least until I got good
I had so many bad times
when I wouldn't even talk
then I would get happy
when they started asking questions
no one would notice
they just thought I was better
I never was
I never will be
Why can't you notice me?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    *looks at her*
    Rado, I notice you. I know your in pain, and I know you feel lost. But I am here ok. Adleast one person is noticing you:D.
    This must have been and emotional write, like many of your pieces at this time. you pulled it off well.

    5/5 Keep writting hun, let you feeling vent through paper and pen.

    --Paula