Wow!! this poem is pretty awesome!! i love it. =) good job sweetie

Very catchy. I like this alot.
Well thought of.

5/5 ~FountainsOfBlood

Dude ima gunna beh singing that 2mrw at school and my teachers will beh like: o.o and then ill beh like: SHUT Up! ITZ CATCHY! and ill go wacko XD man i wish u could come XDDD

~smiles~ good job!
5/5!
Wuvz ya~

--**Skye~

Haha that was kinda cute lol

Haha thats so cute i like it

Wow although this poem is small it captures so much emotion and really makes you see the saddness. Great poem 5/5

Totally love it . very dark , deep. great write.