Babe, you know me. Anything you write, I love, and this is no exception. If it was longer I could actually see it becoming a song.. Think about it lol :-p I LOVE YOU!!! Mwah!! I'll keep ya updated if I post a new poem :D

Loved the poem it had a certain kind of like rhythm to it , i liked it very good

I like the way this poem makes me feel like that is happening to me

I liked the rhythm of this poem. it was fantastic. very beautiful. i loved the title too. it matched the words wisely. wonderful job yet again! 5/5.

-Ashlei.