by L0V3 Mi fAMilY Feb 24, 2008
category :
Friendship, family /
other
There's no way out for a loser, |
It seemed a little.. simple to me, I guess that's because I've been reading really complicated poems lately. >.> I did like it, though. It has a message that's so raw and blunt. I'm sure a lot of people can relate to this. The flow was a little rocky in some places, but you always got back on track. The ending is what really got me. It just tied everything together so perfectly. |
by Veamm
Excellent! |
by StuPiD FrEaK
My friend, you will always be a loser, |
by Natalie
The ending of the poem really brought it all together. And it's a very true statement. But I guess sometimes you can't help who you love, You're not really suppose to.. |
by Nikki
Good job. |