WOOOW |
by Matt L
That last line "Is he gone? Or is he coming back someday?" finishes it off perfectly |
by JEFF
Awesome poem. 5/5 |
Ahhhhh i love it! U r so AmAzInG! |
by Heather
I really love this poem, it almost made me cry............. If feel the same exact way. |
by Heather
PERFECT POEM |
Great write great flow and great emotion keep it up |
That is so sad not knowing if he was coming back of if he is not. Great poem. =) |
by Mello193
Wow, simply brilliant. I really enjoyed reading this. It was kinda sad though....good flow too |
by Freedom
Raelly touchin poem :)))) i loved it |
by Madison
Chill verse |
by Cyma Khan
Very dramatic poem ;) |
by MEMI
Oh thats very very deep |
by maEve may
..so nice!5/5..^_^ |
by Andy
Brill poem! |
by Alexandraa
So pretty |
by Sharr
5/5 |
Good question.! Marvellous |
by Ronny
Aaw Rly nice poem =)) |
by zaheer
Hey this is such a heart-felt poem |