Wow.... just, wow...
that's all i can say atm
this is...just so amazing, i love this
althought there is a few spelling errors, this is just wow
5/5 xD keep it up xx

Sarah x

You have ways with words, keep it up!

Luv this line:I'll wait until the moment is mine
if i can wait that long
without being locked away
just like you said i would be
--awsome