One Cold January Day

by FireCracker   May 19, 2004


I'll never forget what happened
On that cold January Day
I got the worst of news
That god had taken you away

I instanly started crying
For it was my worst of fears
I couldnt believe you had gone
I just shed my every last tears

All i did was argue
I didnt want to understand but
My mom said "God has to take people like the tides have to take sand"

I'm still so upset
This pain i can not bare
I miss you so much
I hope you knew how much i care

I knew you were sick
I wanted to come see you
before you passed
I'm so sorry i didnt but
my love for you will forever last

I wanted to go to your funeral
But my dad forbid me there
I got so mad when he
questioned that i care

The funeral is over
and im still so mad
But no one is to blame
but my dad

I know you are already gone but
in me you'll live forever
i loved you so much
and ill forget you, never

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  • 19 years ago

    by Lil Luce

    good poem and ilso it intreges me about the part with your dad. i just hope it isnt true and u havent lost soemone close
    take care
    xxxLoUxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    AWWW, wonderful. Nice. very good. If you have the chance, I would appreciate it if you could read my new poem “I know that she loves me” and plz. Comment and rate it, I would appreciate it. Thanx.

  • 20 years ago

    by FireCracker

    Hey Its me , Maybeth ! I wanted to thank everyone who has and who will give their comments, it mean alot! And Yes this poem is true usually i only write about true stuff that takes place in my life but not all the time, Thanks so much for your comments!

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