by Alexandra Jade Brewer Feb 24, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Where did it go? |
by Dark Savior
This poem was alright, I found it to be lacking structure and at times really took away from the poem and the rythme that should have been there. |
by HidinVictim
Beautiful, what you have is something srecial and powerful, this is a great piece and i love the 2nd to last stanza, so sweet... 5/5 |
Simply amazing!!! <3 |
by Jenni
The last line of the poem kept me hanging! I want to hear a part two! Great job, you kept the poem interesting and enticing to me. 5/5 |
by KJ
"I need your eyes |