"I need your eyes
The door to my world
The escape
The release from pain"
^^my favorite part

Very good job on your play on words. It was simple yet deep. Nice.
5/5

The last line of the poem kept me hanging! I want to hear a part two! Great job, you kept the poem interesting and enticing to me. 5/5

Simply amazing!!! <3

Beautiful, what you have is something srecial and powerful, this is a great piece and i love the 2nd to last stanza, so sweet... 5/5

This poem was alright, I found it to be lacking structure and at times really took away from the poem and the rythme that should have been there.

I didn't mind reading it and found that it was alright, but the structure really didn't click for me.

4/5