Great poem. It was very deep. It is amazing how these kids, or even adults, anyone, can go through these things day after day, and yet still live on. And still survive. They are the real heroes.
It was a great write and a wonderful topic to write about!
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True true, i agree who are the true hero's other then that brillaintly penned nice job 5/5

Finding their own way to cope
They breathe and live in hope

Those were the best lines! I didn't really like the beginning but as the poem proceded I enjoyed every line more and more. The poem makes you think and that's good.

Actually claps* very very very good. great subject xx

I'm glad you wrote a poem on this..its really true

This is amazing!.. people dont usually think of heroes in this way but they should! you have a great point and u did a beautiful job writing about it.. amazing.. i really enjoyed reading it.. and ur right.. sometimes people can be so brave.. and they should be honored for that. Keep it up! =)

Very good, I lovede the enthusiasm, it really showed you meant what you wrote. I think this should habve have been in the life section though. Greta t job 5/5

They ARE the heroes!
but sadly not many people know that
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