The poem is great I love the fifth part the most.

Great poem, Never knew that mernaids were also called (DARKENS). 5/5

Well I loved this piece, and also the idea that Darkens/Mermaids, are evil creatures. I hope the novel does well, I really do.

Anyway, about the poem. The flow was great, as were the words. I don't know how you cannot love it. great piece. A clear 5/5 from me (which I rarely give, as I've said). Well bloody done.

Brad

P.S. Let me know how the novel's coming.