Daddy Doesn't Care

by yourheartx3   Feb 24, 2008


Can't anybody see me?
can't anybody feel my despair?
i'm so tired of being alone
my heart is broken unable to repair

and it is all your fault dad!
you're the reason i'm this way
you're the reason i'm feeling sad
and you didn't even think to care!

how could you leave me this way?
can't you see me crying?
daddy i cry everyday
daddy you left me so broken

daddy what did i do so wrong
for you to leave me in such a way?
i don't even know where i belong
can't you feel this heavy pain?

of course not you don't care!
you only think of your new kids
not caring for the grief i bare
how can you be so damn cruel!

daddy i'm in so much pain
please make me feel better
daddy i can barely stay sane
but of course you don't care

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  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I know what it feels like to be treated this way. Great job on the emotion and the descriptions are very vivid. Amazing job, you have a talent for writing for sure. There is a very simple rhyme scheme and a basic word choice, yet it seems to work well. 5/5

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