by yourheartx3 Feb 24, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Can't anybody see me? |
by BlueJay
I know what it feels like to be treated this way. Great job on the emotion and the descriptions are very vivid. Amazing job, you have a talent for writing for sure. There is a very simple rhyme scheme and a basic word choice, yet it seems to work well. 5/5 |