Sir Larry, I don't know if I'm out of line in saying this but y'know I cannot help it.....

I love you!

:)

I love you & your writes and how you manage your lines in such a perfect way BUT I have one minor thing...the flow was so unbelievably smooth! and the word choice never was but strong and fabulous, again you've penned a masterpiece. :)

-Can I say something, though?

In the Woods, before the light,
The birds sing out
^^
I really didn't like this, it is just too simple and telling, to say the birds are singing! I didn't find it creative, contrary to your other images, Sir. :)
Again, I'll tell you....if you stop writing with four-lined stanzas, your poems will look more refreshing and powerful. :) Good luck, Sir.

It boosts the spirit of the poet with its great insight