Tasting Truth (contest)

by RobinAnn13   Feb 24, 2008


Taste the truth of my words
feel the sting of my knife
see the darkness in my eyes
as I drink up your life

Taste the truth of my words
for your ending is near
hear the promise when I say
you have no need to fear

Taste the truth of my words
the pain will soon be gone
the last thing you'll see
is the faint light of dawn

Taste the truth of my words
I take your blood to survive
Ill give you my death
so I can stay alive

**ok I don't really like this one but I'll post it anyway

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  • 16 years ago

    by withlove

    I thought it was pretty good
    i like the repetition of the first line
    and i really liked the part where u said ill give you my death how i can keep my life. if thats how it went
    good job
    4.5/5
    =)