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by RobinAnn13 Feb 24, 2008 category : Dark, fantasy / unexplained
Taste the truth of my words feel the sting of my knife see the darkness in my eyes as I drink up your life Taste the truth of my words for your ending is near hear the promise when I say you have no need to fear Taste the truth of my words the pain will soon be gone the last thing you'll see is the faint light of dawn Taste the truth of my words I take your blood to survive Ill give you my death so I can stay alive**ok I don't really like this one but I'll post it anyway
by withlove
I thought it was pretty good i like the repetition of the first line and i really liked the part where u said ill give you my death how i can keep my life. if thats how it went good job 4.5/5 =)