To ignore

by StonedGooberz   Feb 25, 2008


You are trying telling me you love life
Then you smash it in with a stone
You wanted a relationship did you?
How does it feel to be left all alone?

Midnight walks into paradise
Kisses that brought so much passion
Why did you do that, it hurt so much
Leave me like that without compassion?

So here I stand upon the edge of a razor
Deciding which way I wish to fall
Pressing it against all the different parts
No longer do I wish to recall

All the times of pure love we shared
Romantic moments when your lips
Gently caressed my hardened face
Underneath the radiant yet tragic eclipse

Tear stains tattooed upon thy contorted face
Mixing in with my blood upon the wood floor
Inserting the needle, breaking the surface of my skin
You angel have become the hardest to ignore

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  • 13 years ago

    by Meme

    Amaaazing !! Simply great .. The flow .. The rythmes .. The deep emotion behund each and every word ..
    Keep it up
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by No one

    B-rilliant word choice
    E-xcellent flow
    A-mazing imagery
    U-nbelievable title
    T-errific rhyme scheme
    I-couldnt do better
    F-uck you for doing better than me =P
    U-gh, I forgive you. You rock my socks.
    L-ove you forever ^^

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Nice choice of words... very well described...
    good imagination...

    overall a great write...

  • 16 years ago

    by Gizmo

    Imagery is fantatic :]
    emotional
    very detailed.
    love the vocabulary

    8/10

    :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Suicidal Love

    Wow! great job, very emotional, you portrayed your feeling very well
    well done

    xXxSLxXx

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