This was very short. But still good. Everyone has that craving to sin. Or to do something totally out of the ordinary, that is considered "sin" or "wrong". |
by Sumit Ojha
WOW!! excellent poem... I like it... |
by CODACHROME
1st of all I wanna say thanx for ur comment...... I loved this poem it is so true I could see were you were coming from |
This poem interested me b/c well im a gothic sonna of pup, but it was what not waht i thought it would be, and then i was shocked to find i still like, nice flow too 5/5 |
by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx
Great poem!It was short but to the point && plus I love poems that ask questions.Great job!5/5 |
by Lizaveta
That's pretty short but very meaningful. The rhythm is energetic; the use of questions, use of "we" - it all makes a reader feel involved and wonder, what is there in the next line! |
by Spirit
The insight of a sinner |
by Cale
Very well written!! I love what you did with this!! You used lots of emotion and it is SO powerful!! Great work! 5/5 |
by Kuro
Although the lines were short, i really like your wording and the meaning was very easily relatable. nice job |
An enjoyable poem with good flow and meter short and to the point, a controversial topic which is not easily written about. Though I do believe most people may wallow in its rewards but like all sins there is usually a price to pay eventually if not in this world perhaps the next. |